You have eaten
The plums
I left in
The icebox
So I
have taken
Something
Of yours
Take that!
With your insincere
Apology.
I wont forgive you
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welcome to the tess zone, this blogs is a site where you will read all about my thoughts and opinions and sometimes totally random things.
Tess, I like how the speaker of your poem directly addresses the speaker of This is Just to Say and recklessly refuses to forgive him/her. I also noticed your form is a bit different from the original poem. You have a two punctuation marks, an exclamation point and a period after "Apology," which is capitalized for some reason. I like the ending stanza. It's "in-your-face" haha! Good job.
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